Anicrack (FINAL) Hellz yes
I'm a huge melody junkie, and I gotta say: this really satisfied my melodic needs. It's catchy and sounds awesome, with some great transitions (like the first one, love it). Drums were done well too, and placed well through the song, not repeating too much (like some of your past work).
Hoooooowever - as every review has a however - the melody loops through the entire song. Even though it's built up really well, you should consider having at least one more completely different melody that compliments it, and introduce it perhaps during a breakdown or after a build up; you can even try for one that can sound good overlapped over the original. Don't get me wrong, this melody is awesome, and you did a good job of keeping it fresh, but another would do it well. I really hope this isn't really the 'final' version :( I know it can improve a lot, it has potential.